Saturday 21 November 2015

Sample 02 - IELTS task 02 - Salaries earned by international sports professionals

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think it is fully justified, while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinions.

Since historical times, a man has always been valued according to the work he performed. The tradition of calculating an individual's worth in accordance to his job role has continued through agesand in the modern world too, this seems prevalentin almost every field of work. However, it is often evident that people in some professions like sports earn a great amount of money as compared to other conventional professions such as teachers and doctors. While there are people who believe that this is completely justified, a few hold contradictionto the stated fact. I personally believe that,given the amount of hard work and dedication, it requires to build any career, all the professions should be valued equally in terms of the pay-scales.

To begin with, professionals who choose sports as their field of work often confront limited careers, often not spanning more than two decades. Moreover,sports as a profession demands constant practice and years of hard work to nurture the talents and capabilities an individual possess. In order to meet the expectations of the citizens of their respective countries, sports professionals have to make sacrifices on a personal front as well. For instance - due to the constant international tours and tournaments, a sports professional might stay away from his family on a regular basis. In addition, sports professionals also suffer from injuries and have to put in a lot of effort in order to gain the physical fitness and agility required to represent a country on the international level.

On the contrary, some might argue that the high salaries provided to sports professionals are not justified and other professions should not be discarded in front of it. It can be said that in professions like teaching or medical sciences, where an individual serves the community selflessly must be provided with the right incentives in order to encourage youngsters to take up such fields. Moreover, these professions too require tireless efforts and hard work on the side of the individuals, so that they perform their job roles with extreme precision. For example - a surgeon have to undergo years of training to become perfect in performing medical operations.


Thus, it can be concluded that, the money earned by successful sports persons can be justified to a greater extent as the competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. However, the role of other professionals in shaping up the society cannot be completely neglectedand they too should be given appropriate remunerations, which justify the amount of efforts they put in behind their work field.

 (This model answer can be followed as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.)

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